Help With VG Reviews (Formerly "My First Videogame Reviews")

One Sin

I tried my hand at writing video game reviews over the last few weeks and I managed to finish two. I'm not really sure how I should polish my format, so could you guys give me some feedback?

La Pucelle Tactics Review

Disgaea: Hour of Darkness Review

MitchyD

I usually avoid segments and just rock prose. When writing in prose, I also try to avoid segmenting that.

One Sin

I decided to give your suggestion a shot, so here it is. No segments whatsoever.

Super Robot Wars: Original Generation Review