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  • Bravo, dude. That's your best yet.
  • This is what I ended up doing with the beat I originally made for Gunter. Just in case anyone cared/wondered :P
  • I'm too much a coward to take the cowards way out
    So I'mma stay drugged up until my liver gives out
    Get a g a week but my rent still late
    What was I doing? Usin up weight
    Wastin on the reup Usin my gs up
    Now I work with nothing, jesus
    Can't even get any work, it ain't easy
    Get to wondering if the world needs me
    We could end it all, so easy
    But when I grab the knife fear sieze me
    Guns scare me, but I gotta keep one near me
    You hear me?! I keep one near me!
    You done wanna test my balls
    Try me get blown like a 8-ball
    Callin on your boys that aint a issue
    Auto clips o' hollow tips rip ya tissue
  • The fuck dog? you a joke I'd say I'd smoke you like a blunt but you wouldn't even last a toke and I ain't talkin bout a bong when I say I hit and choke get jumpy like a frog an soon you gon croak get to dumpin wit the chopper and dump ya in a moat or maybe contract it out for a note to one o' my westside boys that keep fire in they coat lay you on boards all the rats jump the boat and he junk what 'e tote cuz we can get more and gettin caught is a no, ya know? I don't just go this hard on the flow, I'll lay you on the flo' or grab the fo and lift you out the do' and that's no mo of you pitiful games I riddle you lames with holes and get up in your dames then do the same to your mane sippin on sumtin don't stay in the lane but I keep movin fast cuz the boys aint playin and I ain't either, hollow tips strike at the heart like jay and ether, say you smokin on beasters? I'm smokin king larry cop the egg like easter
  • Click clack paddy whacked throw my dog a bone
    Trick clapped, sadly fact, forget all that you know
    You could get that ratatat even in your own home
    Maybe that'ya get jacked and buy back your zone
    Runnin shit out here Gunnin ya without any fear
    Stunnin numbers in my ear Stomach fillt wit clear
    No beer liqour, specially eighteen and a fo o' lean
    poured up in the sprite bottle, I swerve and I speed
    I burden the seats, work and heat burn purple weed
    Under the influence? Yessir, yes officer, yes indeed
    Now you die for my greed, we dont play in the D
    can't fuck wit the mitten I'm servin the whole LP
    Burnin fools like CDs, if you need anything, see me
    Snitches cant see me, I don't even sell, just see green
    Now it stop being green, white checks tan envelopes
    Only time I check the product is if I want some dope
    But all I want is dough, feel me? I could always use mo'
  • I'm on a mission when I step off in the kitchen
    Tryna get a million just from cookin chickens
    Got me smokin good kush cuz I'm a good cook
    And my ticket low so ol boy say good looks
    Po on the water, so you know i got the bubble bags
    On the bubble up cuz I can make it bubble back
    Thassa double up so I'm lookin at a couple stacks
    Boys want trouble so I copped myself a couple straps
    I'm talking bout carbines and machine pistols
    Can't play the flute, but I can make the beam whistle
    Leave ya bean missin but the hood seemed to miss it
    Nobody seen shit, talk and they don't e'en listen
    Cops see a whiteboy and don't think that I be hurtin people
    They donkno that I got a black plug that murder people
    Or that I'm really a thug, and that i murder people
    Stay the fuck out my way when I be working evil
  • Here's a beat, do as you wish with it, if you want me to change it up, tell me, I'd glad change it.
    I would bring the drums a little bit back, move the synths up, and add a bit more bass. I'm really liking the beat, but it'd be nicer to rap over (for me at least) if you adjusted it a little.
  • Here's a beat, do as you wish with it, if you want me to change it up, tell me, I'd glad change it.
    I would bring the drums a little bit back, move the synths up, and add a bit more bass. I'm really liking the beat, but it'd be nicer to rap over (for me at least) if you adjusted it a little.
    Yeah, I noticed the lack of bass when I was listening thought a better set of speakers. I'm adding a new bass part to add to what I already have, then I set the mixer to make it more balanced, frankly I forgot to pan the tracks, what an embarrassment. .__.;
  • It's that t-r-e to the j-o
    call me young tray cuz I be serving all the yayo
    call me t-3 cuz I fuck with codeine
    Can't call me a j but I fuck wit all the dope fiends
    Yall don't even know what fuckin wit dope means
    You be cuttin up the coke giving people nose bleeds
    i don't touch shit, my coke is so clean
    Might add a little soda to get some mo green
    But I'm cookin that, ya know what i mean?
    I ain't looking back, just keep on rolling
    An that's why ya boy never touched by police
    never been in holding my game is so sweet
    So I'm rollin up sweets, Rollin down the street
    blowin smoke out the windows, blowin smoke out the heat
    Slowin to grab some mo weed then smashing wit my feet
    Blastin the speaks, rappin like my ass bout to asleep
    Goin slow on the flow cuz I'm too high to think
    But i just drink another fo and keep on going
    Towing so much looks like my shocks are going
    But if ya try to strut on me I'm already cocked
    And plenty cocky ain't got a prob knockin yo block
    Walkin off wit ya stock, sure I can get it off
    Cuz I'm a young street flame and you boys are like moths
  • Stop, drop, and get ready to roll
    Cuz I'm spittin fire goin outta control
    No, you can't blow out my flames
    Try to douse me and I'm burnin ya brains
    all my enemies slain, I'm victorious
    They whine while they wane, lyin before us
    cryin before us cuz they dyin before us
    My city asks why my poor sons bore guns
    cuz the sums before us were enormous
    Had to collect more of what distorts us
    The root of all evil, the love of more bucks
    turn my thoughts morbid, conscience more dim
    floor him if he ain't on his way with more yen
    In a den of thieves men fall like the leaves
    Very few don't get sieved, but more are conceived
    a piece means no peace, step out the cycle or cease
    Cuz the vile cycle of greed will only leave you deceased
  • edited July 2011
    Let's play a game, I'll pick a topic and we'll write some rhymes about it, let me start with the topic of editors, awwyeah.

    Now here's my main gal, and she's just about ready to crack
    down on your sentences like a truck train to a track,
    Post edited by La Petit Mort on
  • Let's play a game, I'll pick a topic and we'll write some rhymes about it, let me start with the topic of editors, awwyeah.

    Now here's my main gal, and she's just about ready to crack
    down on your sentences like a truck train to a track,
    if ya ain't, I mean aren't, grammatically correct that
    Red ink will show your neglect and mark that notepad
  • Let's play a game, I'll pick a topic and we'll write some rhymes about it, let me start with the topic of editors, awwyeah.

    Now here's my main gal, and she's just about ready to crack
    down on your sentences like a truck train to a track,
    if ya ain't, I mean aren't, grammatically correct that
    Red ink will show your neglect and mark that notepad
    Five hundred sentences per second insensitive fingertips
    Rip across the board clicking quickly without a slip

  • Now here's my main gal, and she's just about ready to crack
    down on your sentences like a truck train to a track,
    if ya ain't, I mean aren't, grammatically correct that
    Red ink will show your neglect and mark that notepad
    Five hundred sentences per second insensitive fingertips
    Rip across the board clicking quickly without a slip
    when she finishes mangling and untangling your P-O-S
    You'll probably dangle your flesh from a tree, or scream in distress
  • [code]It's murder on the track like jack tha ripper
    But im somethin more like a gangsta jack tripper
    a hustler, notorious stack flipper, blast an dipper
    Redact whispers with a pistol, a head cracka and splitter
    I don't really boast of murders in real life
    But I feel like im talking to myself when im on the mic
    Or having the conversations that I wish I could have
    or that I tried to relate an they couldn't understand
    Its all in my head, an extension of my own insanity
    They hear what I said but think o' what they demand of me
    So my adventures come delivered through verbal medium
    How I defeated em, beseeched and believed in em
    Let down and left to bleed by em, demeaned by em
    Stand on my own and speak to myself, relieved of em
    Probably won't be grieved by em, but who needed em?
    Not me, street janitor, I'll sweep em an be clean of em[/code]

    I'm going to try write a hook and some more verses and make a sing out of this one.
  • I got that sticky hairy green, check ya spice rack
    I can guarantee you don't have shit like that
    One hitter quitter, from blueberry to vanilla
    and that's anything but, HIGH high forrealla
    I got the bananas and bongos fo ya so called gorillas
    Get tha fuck outta here, I fuck wit real killas
    Put it in the pot, make it double and rock quick
    If you on shit, get lost quick, boy you is not slick
    An I got shit that'll wet ya mop, clean you off bitch
    fully automatic don't even gotta cock this
    Bustin off slugs like a lotta little rockets
    Hit ya in the chest, knock ya eyes out their sockets
    bourgeois muthafucka hit ya in the pen pocket, you not shit
    I don't botch it even off sniff I got this
    None yall can touch me, lyrically, crimnally
    Hook yall sublimnally, dopefiend you finna be


    I've been playing a lot of simon says lately, anybody game? (One person pouts out an arbitrary number of words/topics, next person writes a verse incorporating all of them and gives words for the next person)
  • Quarter for seven, on front so I pay eight
    An I get it off so me an my dog both ate
    Sniff by sniff, rock by rock, hard or soft
    Boys run up drawn two flames like a moth
    Get it? Nah you sittin with thirty six chunks
    g seventeens two degrees that kinda month
    altho summer for the shooters, powdered up
    zooters bummin on them twofers, paper up
    Get a way ta get away, from all the dust
    portraits of my bust on the bus they wanna bust
    lustful green eyes plottin out where I ride
    wearin disguise I swear these guys tellin lies
    even told my momma, they jus about drama
    cuz I spit like a llama, not fond of comin offa
    rather not fond of givin up lettin parchment exodus
    Sex an drugs, sit an muse, confused by this reckless stuff


    Yall gettin in the way, gowan an eat my vapes,
    I'll jet ahead to set the pace an let yall chase,
    an racing to the bread might catch ya a case
    but ya gotta risk it all to ball, that's what I say
    an I follow my advice, steady rollin the dice
    Hollow look in my eyes blood flowin colder than ice
    Seventeen shots release ya hold on ya life
    told ya it's shief, please beware of tha light
    It'll guide ya to salvation, send ya to hell
    your mind's elevation or your funeral bells
    elation never came for me, only despair
    witnessing the wanton consecration of vulgar affairs
    and all that entails, still hold ya head proudly
    if my heart fails I let the last beats ring loudly
    Ya can't down me, I won't ever be defeated
    Now an forever, the throne is where I'm seated
  • You should post these in a blog.
  • Word. I would post/critique more, but I hate posting and critiquing lyrics when I can't hear them. It's kind of dumb, but I've gotten so obsessive about the rhythm and sound of my writing lately that it doesn't feel right.
  • Word. I would post/critique more, but I hate posting and critiquing lyrics when I can't hear them. It's kind of dumb, but I've gotten so obsessive about the rhythm and sound of my writing lately that it doesn't feel right.
    I feel you, I mostly post just because I don't carry pen and paper and nneed to get the stuff out of my head. Maybe I should just start spitting into my phone everytime I get an idea.
  • edited August 2011
    Maybe I should just start spitting into my phone everytime I get an idea.
    That's gonna be one pretty gross phone.
    Post edited by Sail on
  • Right now I'm movin so the world can remember
    I make what you get per annum this september
    They keep on coming with new orders, annuit coeptis
    an we'll be crossin borders, run far or accept us
    they can set those cordons, try to arrest us
    the moves reflect their thoughts, telegraph the message
    right now ain't got a vestige, not movin reckless
    but I keep switching up, finger twitch like I'm restless
    Itchin to get shit on, can't linger got investments
    Might catch one pitching but ya cant finger who the rest is
    talk on my ascension, snitch go and bleat some secrets
    my intentionsll be to get ya heat ya when you sleeping
    catch ya boy alone, beat im until he secretes yo location
    permanent vacation in paradise cuz this is my vocation
    I make arrangements, then my lane shifts toward derangement
    this anger makes me insane, I'm painful to play with

    This one was bothering me all night while I was working, had to write it down.
  • I need a beat for this one, if anyone wants to throw something at me.

    I can't cope
    Drowning in a sea of false hope
    I can't cope
    So I drown myself in dope
    I cant cope
    I cant cope

    I can't cope
    Drowning in a sea of false hope
    I can't cope
    So I drown myself in smoke
    I cant cope
    I cant cope

    I don't sleep at night, I just cry silently
    could've died at birth, well why didn't he?
    they all take guesses, but they all missin me
    why am I the only soldier without a mission b?
    engine full throttle til I choke on emissions
    liq out the bottle til I have no more visions
    push the auto until I drive with the fishes
    fuck tomorrow I can't vibe with you bitches
    fuck the bible, fuck your lies an yo wishes
    I can lie to myself, can't rely on no bitches
    struggle to survive, it's a war of attrition
    what can I divide when I ain't done addition?
    how can I pay dues with no food in the kitchen?
    If I'm already down, how can a fool be slippin?
    say "man you trippin" but don't ring the alarm
    damn all you bitches get the fuck off my gar I can't cope

    I can't cope
    Drowning in a sea of false hope
    I can't cope
    So I drown myself in dope
    I cant cope
    I cant cope

    I can't cope
    Drowning in a sea of false hope
    I can't cope
    So I drown myself in smoke
    I cant cope
    I cant cope

    I can't cope with reality, in reality
    seeing my own incompatible duality
    unpalatable but I eat the plate handed me
    babblin, feedin my own insanity
    trapped in my head, overstandin me?
    I don't understand why they all mad at me
    If I fall so hard, why you ain't grab at me?
    when I ball so hard, why you ain't balance me?
    fuck, I'm long off the balance beam
    already know the answers, so answer candidly
    bi-polar, operating manically
    erratically, clarity appears magically
    while I'm staggerin off the wagon seat
    I walk between a dragons teeth
    the goal is the gold, guess I gotta go through shit
    but I still can't cope, hope that you know this

    I can't cope
    Drowning in a sea of false hope
    I can't cope
    So I drown myself in dope
    I cant cope
    I cant cope

    I can't cope
    Drowning in a sea of false hope
    I can't cope
    So I drown myself in smoke
    I cant cope
    I cant cope
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